Breakup Letter, Dramatic reading
Created on: March 4th, 2007
This is the one and only ytmnd I have ever submitted, and it is now officially a monster...
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"I luvved this boii lets call him Jack, but he kept hanging around this gorl mel, so i was like, hey y dya keep hanging around thid uther girl ur paying more antention to her than me and he sed sorry and it was ok. But then he kept hanging around her, eyeing her up and lookin at her tits so i sed right were not goin out nemore and begged so ley him hav anuvver chance. But then 3 days later he broke up with me by txt and i was like watever ur losin a gr8 thing and now he reli rgrets it but im not havvin him"
Great job; hilarious. Couple of minor suggestions, though: you seemed to correct the bad grammar/spelling while reading it. For example the first "bastert" was pronounced just like "bastard" but with a little more emphasis on the "st." The sentence "she the one who put me to do this" was said as "she the one who put me up to this." And a lot of the run-on sentences were given the appropriate pauses as if the periods and commas were there anyway. The chuckling I thought was fine. Anyway, very funny stuff.
I think your dramatic rendering is brilliant, and all the laughs and mess-ups are perfect. I have to listen to this pretty much every time I go on ytmnd, just because. My favorite part is probably the WORLDDDDDDDD part, but also just that line... "you make me touch your hands for stupid reasons." Who the hell says that?
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