"Not to mention most of the quotes you provided are dialog which doesn't have to be grammatically correct." .... Dialog doesn't have to be gramatically correct? It's a book! It's English text! Of course it has to be grammatically correct; unless you're an ameatur, which in this case Rowling isn't.
Most people that don't read HP would not catch the misspellings, ergo I laid it out, plain and simple, why this page is a fake.
Remonster: Do you honestly think that someone that's typing up a manuscript in Word is going to bypass all the inherent squiggly red lines all over the page? I don't think so.
Let's just number a few of the obvious failings in this fake:
1. 'You came through in the end' is pure Americanism.
2. So is 'you saw how Severus went down'.
3. 'quickly looked at both sides' - sh*t English. Should be looked TO both sides.
4. 'someone who doesn't care wouldn't have faced up' - sh*t grammar. Should be 'someone who DIDN'T care wouldn't have faced up'.
5. 'It's weird but' - more Americanisms.
6. 'I never listened to him or I never' - utterly sh*t English. Should be 'I never listened to him, and I never' or 'I never... nor did I'.
7. 'turned to pay his full attention' - nuh-uh. More crap English. You don't 'pay your full attention'. You give it.
8. 'better than we give him credit for, that's why...' For f*ck's sake. Did you hire a child to do this? There should be a full stop (a period to you Americans) after 'for', and 'that' should start with a capital T. Oh, and it should be 'gave' rather than 'give'.
In summary:
FAIL.
