It would be better if you did the two following things: Replace "Barrel Roll" with Peppy's voice, and replace "NOOOOO" with Darth. Otherwise, very convoluted.

-4

it was a barral roll, not to be confused with a Barrel Roll, and just no

+8

OMG!!! that is amazing, 5's all around

lawl

OMFG Best ytmnd ever

A copy of an old WTMND, but the reading out loud makes it extra funny. 5/5 :)

dont listen to Weezer

ewww...halo

omfg he dont not know englis good :)

You sir love the cock.

-4

I think I see a pulitzer in this guy's future.

digimon2.ytmnd.com -- a better worst fanfiction of all time and read better. Decent though.

+1

lol, fo tight

Then out of no where BOOM happend.

+1

The roflcopter has landed

+1

fanfiction.net is hillarious :P great find

rofling goodness

The sad part is that that story is more well cionstructed and concieved than the actual game's story.

+2

Sorry, I meant constructed, not cionstructed.

not.

lol explodd

+1

rofl

Halo > WoW >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>cancer>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>this fanfic

-1

lol I love the "explodd" thing

where is teh liek sequilz in space so i dont explodd

english skill explodd

+2

"Everything got wet and messy." TEH LOL

+3

oh man im crying. that was hilarious!!!

BOOM happend.

+1

"but he wasnt a robot liek Master Chief so he didnt fly" Lol, too funny to not 5

+2

dont know why rating didnt work there

rofl, get your halo knowledge and spelling right

By the way, this site has 6,666 views, just saying, )=$

best. fan fic. ever

had me on the edge of my seat

+1

Very funny, the use of grammar is so distorted it's funny

+1

"and said "NOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER" and then got tired and slept."

+2

Reminds me of my firsts little stories I wrote in my childhood. :)

"NOOOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER!" and then he got tired and slept.

"NOOOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER!" and then he got tired and slept. ROFL ROFL ROFL ROFL burger

-2

i agree with first post. add ytmnd fads. oh and you made the HBO frontpage.

fo tight.

+1

DO A BARREL ROLL

incredible

+1

Violent images of myself punching through a brick wall in utter mental frustration at this is all that fills my mind. +5 for barrel rolls.

+1

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER!!!!!" then he got tired and slept.

Hahahaha, this is so good. This reminds me of sh*t from high school...yeah, there were some stupid people at my high school. 5 for anti-dramatic pho-net-ik reading. Keep it up!

fake?

I'm amazed at the quantity of 'teh's lol

I lol'd

Hilarious! Keep it up!

Ni©Ë Ÿ†MnÐ fav!!!!

5, -1 for skipping like ten words.

Joe Chief punched a alien

Interesting find. Usually I find people's inablity to use the English language funny, but I didn't laugh at this for some reason. I guess it's because there's a fine line between something being so stupid that its funny, and so stupid that it's just downright pathetic. You did a pretty good job reading it though, I only caught a couple of errors, but other than that it was decent.

I must say one thing though... There's no way that this can be real. I really don't think anyone could've made such an unbelievably horrible fanfic unless they meant to do so. But then again I could be wrong, but if I am then humanity has officially reached a whole new low.

+1

I believe that this was intentionally bad, as well. It was just TOO bad.

SHOTING AT SHIP

fo tight

Get ready fo tight!

Hey, and WeezerBlue is right, you should replace Barrel Roll and NOOOO. It's never too late.

-1

No, it a barral roll, its different, and its not worth it for the noooo. It'd just ruin it.

+1

SO FUNNY! WHEN U FIRST SAID "TEH" I EMITTED AN AUDIBLE LOL AKA I LAFFED OUT LOUD. AND UM DONT LISTEN TO THE PPL WHO SAY TO ADD NOOOOO AND BARREL ROW OR ILL GIVE YOU A ONE FOR F*CKNG UP SOMETHING FUNNY WITH SOME LAME FADS (NOOO ISNT LAME BUT BARREL ROW IS)

+1

dont you ever f*ck with Chan88

-1

I agree with Weezer, this begs to be YTMNDinized. So hey, this reminds me of that movie Idiocracy. If you have seen that then you know just how scary this is.

-2

God is a merciful God, in that he smiteth not the writers of this awful tripe.

W-T-F

YES.

I laughed. And then I got tired and slept.

+2

haha joe chief

Id have 5'd this if the guy's home page wasnt ytmnd... seems a tad suspicious

-1

simply put, it "skwashed" my perception of bad fan fiction.

5.. fo tight

blast fast kudos all around.

"Barral Roll" FTW

+7 for loling, -2 for Halo. no i'm tired and must sleep

Get ready fo tight

and get ready fo tight

Do me a favor, and put Darth Vader's NOOO in for this NOOO

You have a pretty voice.

Joe Cheif Punched and alien and got big gun. Then got tired and slept

I lol'd

This would be complete genius if it weren't written by a retard. 5'd

What a good find!

i like that story

AND THEN PUSHED THEM INTO SPACE

Wepon FTW

HE DID A BARRAL ROLL!!!!

Do a barral roll!

It's not registering my vote....

Used "teh" too much

"Get ready fo tight" is the best catchphrase that will never be

+1

i cant breath!!!!!!!!!!!!

Needs Vader and Peppy

hahahahahaha

"Get ready fo tight" is the best catchphrase that will never be (

DO A BARRAL ROLL

"and said 'NOOO HE WAS MY BROTHER' and then got tired and slept." win

HOW DO I SHOT AT SHIP?

your voice is the best LMAO

This was just... Epic! i Luvd its! ther was maney shottings!!

Just sitting here watching my Space TV...

That was hilarious! Marry me plz.

There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god There is no god

win

pictures please. i don't come here to read

wtf...5 becawz ime two fuking konfuseded two think

I just said "No this win" to myself.

lolololololololololollllllllllllllllllllllll

halo ftw. auto 1 for makin fun of halo.

-1

Halo sucks in general, WORST FPS EVER, H-L2 FTW

-2

that's so horrible, the lowness of its score loops around BACK to the top TWICE to land on Five. Somehow, the spoonfull of sugar that your recitation of it made the rest of its rancid, putrid, gut-scourging content go down smooth and easy, and yet I do not know whether to praise you or CURSE YOU. Ugh... whoever wrote that needs to get a castration YESTERDAY. Natural Selection MUST purge this filth from the gene pool.

+1

More proof that prepubecent morons are obseesed with cheesy video game storylines with good graphics.....

This really sucks, really hard. TOOOO BEEEE CONtinewd?

Nice job, but there are worse fanfictions. Google Tara Gilesbie.

HUMAN PEOPLE ARMY GUYS!!!!!!!!!

+1

The funniest think i have ever seen (not lieing) you did the voice so good. Please make another if you can. It was just truly great.

Is this from that Peter Chimara dude who wrote "The Matrix Return?"

Well done. To BE CON-tinued?