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| Site Title: | GRADED Shoe Lawsuit Final Warning | ||||||||||
| Site Domain: | proofreadfinalwarning.ytmnd.com | ||||||||||
| Created by: | phaseblue | ||||||||||
| Created on: | 2006-06-23 15:44:11 | ||||||||||
| Image Origin: | AWE board http://board.awempire.com/showthread.php?t=790&page=2 | ||||||||||
| Sound Origin: | Kikujiro (from Shoes on Lawsuits ytmnd) | ||||||||||
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| Description: | After proofreading LiveJasmin's "Final Warning," motorcitykitty's grade looks to be in real jeopardy. | ||||||||||
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1 | 2 | 3
| 5'd for posterity | ||||||
| pwnt | ||||||
| +4+1 | ||||||
| hahaha | ||||||
| man, he is so gonna get summer school | ||||||
| Haha... just remove the text. | ||||||
| lol what a dumbass | ||||||
| One point short of passing. HELD BACK. | ||||||
| WIN | ||||||
| Artfully executed with literary aplomb. | ||||||
| lol | ||||||
| 5'd for ownage. | ||||||
| Dude he is a professional porn website developer he can do what he wants....arrrrr cough | ||||||
| this mod is a retard. | ||||||
| Good | ||||||
| This guy is a f*cktard. Too bad he convinced max to ban people on the forums. | ||||||
| flawless victory, FINISH HIM! | ||||||
| lol, failed the regents | ||||||
| ROFFLECOPTER!! 4.96 after 45 votes???? Not bad!! | ||||||
| We all rule. End. | ||||||
| You missed one: "Regardless of what you may think." is a fragment, as well. | ||||||
| It's a shame what America's youth today is coming to. I blame violent video games. (;D) | ||||||
| Grammar n00bs. +5 | ||||||
| This is full of win. | ||||||
| LOL 4.96 | ||||||
| 5, just like everyone else | ||||||
| So much WIN | ||||||
| LOL A++ | ||||||
| Thanks for catching that, Necronomicon! I've added it. | ||||||
| WIN!! | ||||||
| This gets an A+ in my book :D | ||||||
| TEH TEACHER BECOMES TEH STUDENT! XD | ||||||
| wait, why is motorcitykitty posting that? what's the controversy? haha | ||||||
| i lold | ||||||
| they fail at school, why do you think theyre doing live webcam acts? | ||||||
| I f*ckIN' LOVE YOU MAN! | ||||||
| HAHAHA | ||||||
| HAHAHAHAGHAHAAHJAFHSAHDASHSAHSAAAHAHAHHAHA
hah | ||||||
| Also, infringement is mispelled in the final paragraph. | ||||||
| HAha. | ||||||
| two words: HELD BACK. REPEATING THE THIRD GRADE. LOW STANDARDIZED TEST SCORES. I GUESS THIS WAS MORE THAN TWO WORDS. | ||||||
| "mispelled" should be "misspelled" : ( | ||||||
| I doubt he'll come see you :( | ||||||
| graded, lol |
-1 | |||||
| sorry, im too dumb to not know rating right now, but that was awesome :) | ||||||
| Thanks also, ChuckNorris00! You guys rock - keep 'em coming if I missed any more ;) | ||||||
| He's at risk of failing the class... | ||||||
| You 1. Him 0. | ||||||
| yes...YES!!!! Punch The Keys For God's Sake! | ||||||
| wouldn't the one sentence be "Unlike you children harrassing people, working is not funny" or "Working is not funny unlike you children harrassing people" | ||||||
| Learn some grammar. You don't need a comma before a conjunction for a compound verb, only for a compound sentence. The phrase "images of our sites and are at risk" does not need a comma in it. Missed a few other things too, but good effort!
Final grade: 2. |
-1 | |||||
| hell ya get this on top 5 | ||||||
| I loled. thanks | ||||||
| owned rofl | ||||||
| "We bank great money here $$ €€" Fragment, unecessary use of Dollar and Euro signs. | ||||||
| HA HA HA | ||||||
| I hate the shoe fad, but this rocks. | ||||||
| i hate the shoe fad too | ||||||
| wheu, high rating | ||||||
| you are officially godly... | ||||||
| pwned!!!11 | ||||||
| Please see me. | ||||||
| downvoted for great justice | ||||||
| LOL | ||||||
| This is excellent. As a grammar nazi myself, this actually made me laugh out loud. Exquisite. | ||||||
| 5 | ||||||
| ROFL. I can't stop laughing. | ||||||
| LOL | ||||||
| must add....5.... | ||||||
| Funniest sh*t evar | ||||||
| HAH! | ||||||
| pwn't | ||||||
| I hate shoehead, but I also hate people who make empty threats about frivolous lawsuits and can't spell, so I shall abstain from voting. | ||||||
| OWN'd | ||||||
| Aaahh i fkn love it! | ||||||
| Oh snap, grammar! | ||||||
| holy sh*t perfect | ||||||
| "downvoted for great justice" | ||||||
| roflcakes | ||||||
| Ha! | ||||||
| NICE!!!!! | ||||||
| They wanted perverts visiting their sites, they have them. Fight the power! |
+1 | |||||
| uhh pwn3d?
YES! | ||||||
| rofl | ||||||
| Back to the 3rd grade for you. | ||||||
| kiss me! | ||||||
| le art. | ||||||
| "So, as a result of this" is also incorrect, as are the very short paragraph sizes. | ||||||
| pwned | ||||||
| I'd nominate you for teacher of the year. | ||||||
| I lol'd. | ||||||
| LOVE IT DUDE YOU GREAT IM GOING TO SPONSOR THIS ONE!! AHAHAH | ||||||
| +4 for flaming that douche. +1 for the "Please see me". | ||||||
| raped by the english language. 5. | ||||||
| Who are these idiots? And multi-million dollar site my ass. | ||||||
| I think the third "paragraph" actually goes something like this: "Instead of offering the idea as a promotion of some kind--we might have (gone) along with that--you have violated international copyright laws (by)using images of our sites and are at risk of having your server shut down." I don't think "You have violated" should be the start of a new sentence. ANYWHOOO, 5!!! | ||||||
| I literally laughed out loud.
... Now all we need is a dramatic reading. | ||||||
| Incredible. | ||||||
| Point out that "you children" is repetitive. | ||||||
| congrats on having the highest rated ytmnd of all time. | ||||||
| Pwnt. 5'd. | ||||||
| 5 stars for a stellar ytmnd. | ||||||
| Language Art nazis unite. | ||||||
| Also "gone along" instead of "went along". And that little piece of the sentence should perhaps be in parenthesis. | ||||||
| YTMND will get sued into oblivion. This wins. | ||||||
| Also, "needing to hire" is the wrong tense for the sentence. | ||||||
| Nice work! | ||||||
| Funny how he calls us children, yet he's the one crying. | ||||||
| XD | ||||||
| LOL Nice. Whats the link to those forums? | ||||||
| f*gs | ||||||
| XD | ||||||
| They're orangutans | ||||||
| lol@the irony from his sig: "Support free speech" | ||||||
| "Learn some grammar. You don't need a comma before a conjunction for a
compound verb, only for a compound sentence. The phrase "images of our
sites and are at risk" does not need a comma in it. Missed a few other
things too, but good effort! Final grade: 2." You're a bitch. The end. | ||||||
| what was that whited out section? | ||||||
| loves it | ||||||
| lawl | ||||||
| 5'd | ||||||
| Don't forget there's another "your" without an r. ;D | ||||||
| lololol | ||||||
| I personally don't think this whole shoe on head thing is funny...but i enjoy mocking the people who threaten YTMND. | ||||||
| Pwnt. | ||||||
| LOL COMMENTING! | ||||||
| lol chimpanzees | ||||||
| Isn't that right Ebaum? | ||||||
| Haha nice. | ||||||
| Lawsuit final warning has NO CLASS! This does though. | ||||||
| what a tard, he must be 10 | ||||||
| What can I say? f*cking OWNED. | ||||||
| its been a long time since a top rated has had such a high rating, congrats (also screw those who sue ftw) | ||||||
| LoL! Give this one to boomaga! | ||||||
| HAHA , PWND | ||||||
| Ralphie... A+! +! +! +! Grammar mavens of the world unite! | ||||||
| woot! | ||||||
| lol | ||||||
| thats lame i feel like im in fricken english class! | ||||||
| lol...shoe heads... | ||||||
| retarded shoe fad | ||||||
| Shoo Shoo! | ||||||
| 2 legal 'threats' in 3 weeks, arnt we doing well. | ||||||
| pwned
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| Nice of you all to laugh about it. You're not the one that'd be facing the lawsuit. | ||||||
| lol, lawsuit smausmoot, Max is not afraid of any legal stuff, remember when he put that message on the front page saying "MADEYE MOODY DIES,VOLDEMORT MESSES UP HIS SPELL AND KILLS HIMSELF," and so forth? | ||||||
| LOLOLOL ytmnd. | ||||||
| To all YTMNDers: KEEP MAKING "SHOE-ON-HEAD" YTMNDs!! | ||||||
| Drinking chimps FTW. | ||||||
| pwntageous | ||||||
| Very nice. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who gets annoyed at these illiterate bullies. 5, because much more effort went into it than taking 30 seconds to post an unedited screenshot. | ||||||
| FTW | ||||||
| lol @ whores | ||||||
| YTMND Ruining the Internet FTW! | ||||||
| I lolled every time they called us children. I'd love to see children do some of that excellent photoshopping and sound mixing that I've seen. Hell, I'm 21 and I can't do half of that stuff.
Though this fad needs none of that. | ||||||
| fckin wankers... GO YTMND | ||||||
| A+ | ||||||
| IM GOING TO SUE THE SHOE! | ||||||
| Teacher, Teacher, can I give you a five? | ||||||
| Wow they suck. | ||||||
| making fun of these guys is good, but really this is too easy a target. doing the grading all over it I think is a little excessive, the image kinda speaks for itself. The music doesn't add anything. I like the effort on the text but it's superfluous. the title is fine but doesn't add much. Funny image, so-so ytmnd. | ||||||
| f*ckING RAPED. YOU WIN! | ||||||
| We have NO CLASS. | ||||||
| 5'ed | ||||||
| HAHAHHAHAAH F*CK HIM! | ||||||
| Shut up Flakmaster. D: | ||||||
| Revise it! He didn't use proper MLA! (the links under the line.) | ||||||
| That whole thing was almost as bad as the "LOL" in the Bauman Emails. | ||||||
| Stop Anti-Porn Laws! | ||||||
| win
I'm now interested in the shoe | ||||||
| You should also add something about the irony of including a "Support Free Speech" site in his signature. | ||||||
| lol grammur. tehse rupid idoits shud lern to spel.. liek wtf. | ||||||
| zomg, we may be sued, but i certainly think you were the true pwner here | ||||||
| I don't get it (although I'm not going to be an *sshole and give it a 1 because of it). | ||||||
| You have missed some grammer errors in there. but LOL | ||||||
| Ahahaha! | ||||||
| Hahahahaha... What a bunch of world-class turds... The "Shoe on Head" era (all 3 days of it) probably gave them more free publicity than they'd ever received. 5 stars, plus some borscht. | ||||||
| HOW COULD YOU NOT BRIING UP THE FREE SPEECH THING HE HAS IN HIS SIG? | ||||||
| Yeah I gotta say, that "Support Free Speech" thing on his sig really bugs the hell out of me. Saying you defend free speech just to keep your porn site online is one thing, recognizing the difference between copyright infringement and fair use in a site like YTMND is quite another. I hate people who take up or defend good causes for bad ends. It's exactly the same as Scientology speaking out for religious freedom to prevent being shut down as a multi-billion dollar predatory cult. Sorry for the rant ;) | ||||||
| phaseblue: not to be an *ss but...
when you said
"harassing people working"
shouldnt it be
"harassing people while working"
:P | ||||||
| Actually, those people are NOT working. It specifically states on one of their info pages that the camwhores are NOT employees of their site, and that it's a membership site :)~ | ||||||
| True but im correcting phase :P | ||||||
| classic | ||||||
| f*cking priceless. | ||||||
| It also cant be used as evidence as a cease and desist in court! | ||||||
| If you wanted to be an *ss you could say "warning" in "Final warning" should be capitalized because it is a title. Myeh Coppa. | ||||||
| wow that was great | ||||||
| D- please see me | ||||||
| However we should stop doing the thing. If anything becouse it's premoting someone who isn't really intrested in working with people. I mean come on this is word of mouth advertising and he wants us to get permission first? | ||||||
| http://motorcityirony.ytmnd.com/ | ||||||
| Awesome. | ||||||
| FGJ | ||||||
| Grammar Nazis FTW. | ||||||
| +20 | ||||||
| Oh man... the win... | ||||||
| LOL | ||||||
| A+. | ||||||
| Oh snap | ||||||
| Kikujiro music :( | ||||||
| He should be lucky that people are promoting his site. Now people will go there and pay to watch girls put shoes on their heads :P | ||||||
| heh, gay fad though. | ||||||
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| Those are not chimpanzees....they're orangutans. | ||||||
| winnar | ||||||
| You missed one in the person's signature, he spelled "webmaster" incorrectly. | ||||||
| OMFG LAWSUIT | ||||||
| Very nice. I especially liked how you pointed out how informal and unprofessional it was. | ||||||
| hahaha - I like how YTMND is owning EVERYONE lately | ||||||
| oh crap, I'm starting to use internet lingo | ||||||
| Umm I won't take down my pics. also, my adress is, (insert Eric Baumans adress) and my anme is (Eric Bauman) | ||||||
| lawsuit=0, formal grammatical errors=5 | ||||||
| Sue me was what I forgot to add. | ||||||
| I despise this fad, but I do enjoy pretending to be a teacher | ||||||
| 5 bonus points for you, for the funniest SOH spin-off. | ||||||
| Does this mean this horrid fad will end? | ||||||
| omg pwned! | ||||||
| I Think one of those chimpanzees wrote that | ||||||
| DUDE!!!! Somebody needs to kick the sh*t out of that cocky bitch and teach her a lesson that YTMND RULES. PERIOD. | ||||||
| OWNED! | ||||||
| nice job | ||||||
| th' thing is, it'd be infringing on free speech if they tried to stop. unless the people who are in the pictures say so, we're allowed to do whatever the heck we want. | ||||||
| One site was funny. 50000 is pure ytmnd, uncreative 14 year old, overkill. I agree with this guy, you people are idiots. | ||||||
| That was established a long time ago, get with the times. | ||||||
| Max will most likely kick this dudes *ss on monday for ringing the doorbell, or call the cops, but I know the one we all want... | ||||||
| pwned | ||||||
| Yeah, parody = legal... FTW!! | ||||||
| LMFAO!!! | ||||||
| What a cockf*g. | ||||||
| who would not 5 this, srsly | ||||||
| If I recall, they make one of their servers, chats or whatever, free for anyone to just walk in and talk to their "Models" What do they expect. | ||||||
| epic league | ||||||
| in mla, numbers shouldn't be expressed numerically. i.e. Twenty-Four, not 24 | ||||||
| beautiful | ||||||
| As a "student teacher" I must say - well done. | ||||||
| i can't not five this | ||||||
| We've beaten the evil giant known as scientology, does he really think his little cam-whore site scares us? | ||||||
| pwned
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| LOL | ||||||
| lol | ||||||
| Lol, it's like the Peter Nguyen essays! | ||||||
| Lovely. | ||||||
| LOLOLOL!! FTW! FTW! this guy really needs to go to Summer school XD | ||||||
| lol | ||||||
| Went through and followed up on a few more suggestions. Thanks for all the votes and the extra help editing! ;D | ||||||
| lol @ nub | ||||||
| Hahaha, nice revision :D | ||||||
| Hahaha. | ||||||
| Why can't these litigation-threatening people type? Jesus! | ||||||
| Your the man now, dog! | ||||||
| how many time will YTMND be threatened with law suits from copy right, when we're under the safe bubble of parody? O.o | ||||||
| 5 because i hate this fad and hopefully this is the last one | ||||||
